Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
day by day the inclination of people towards media influences is increasing such as Televisions.I am completely agree that it has so many untoward repercussion on our health and habits.
With the advancement in technology, there has been a significant change in the way a tv programme is presented. Addition of attractive elements has resulted into a drastic change in the number of viewers. Nowadays, people spare time by watching their favourite tv programme and broadcasters has contents for almost all age groups and viewers find them entertaining and knowledgable in some aspects. This habit has put limitation on our socializing process and now we meet each other on very few moments. For instance, once decade before i didn't have access to television, so at that time i used to play with my friends and relative and i was comparably fit. it clearly shows that increasing tendency has a debilitating effect on our society.
Secondly, it not only put restriction on our social ability to interact but at the same time it has a significant negative impacts on our physical well beings. The obesity rate is skyrocketing among youth as they devote very less time to physical activities, such as playing football or cricket. A recent study has revealed that half of our generation is suffering from respiratory diseases due to over weight. it can be alleviate only by spreading awareness among the younger section. it is high time for all of us to mange our time to effectively to take part in various activities.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the propensity towards media influences has a worse effect on our social structure and bonding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963898917 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98986719918 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4404353081 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124048628924 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383330612162 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346644162571 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629329315612 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370896851456 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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