You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-Give details for the booking which you have madeInform changes that you want with your bookingSt

Essay topics:

You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-

Give details for the booking which you have made
Inform changes that you want with your booking
State reasons for the changes.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Vikas gupta and I booked two family suites in your hotel for five days in june. I am writing this letter to request you to change our booking dates for the period.

I along with my wife and children were supposed to stay in the hotel from 5th june till 9th june, 2018. we had also booked two taxis for local sight-seeing. However, due to urgent work commitments at my office, we would not been able to check in before 15th june, 2018. Hence, I am requesting you to kindly change our arrival date to the 15th of june and checkout date to the 19th of june at 12 pm. The taxi booking should also be changed according to our plans.

I regret the inconvenience caused to you due to the above changes.

I look forward to a positive reply from your end.

Yours sincerely,

Vikas gupta

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'june 2018'.
Suggestion: june 2018
...tay in the hotel from 5th june till 9th june, 2018. we had also booked two taxis for local...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...otel from 5th june till 9th june, 2018. we had also booked two taxis for local sig...
^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'june 2018'.
Suggestion: june 2018
...d not been able to check in before 15th june, 2018. Hence, I am requesting you to kindly c...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42105263158 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29626940614 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5555232323 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309869999398 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120330286446 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105632433385 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182376991634 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143015285251 0.0580467560999 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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