You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-Give details for the booking which you have madeInform changes that you want with your bookingSt

Essay topics:

You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-
Give details for the booking which you have made
Inform changes that you want with your booking
State reasons for the changes.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Vikas Gupta and I booked two family suites in your hotel for five days in June. I am writing this letter to request you to change our booking dates for the period.

I along with my wife and children were supposed to stay in the hotel from 5th June till 9th June, 2018. We had also booked two taxis for local sight-seeing. However, due to urgent work commitments at my office, we would not been able to check in before 15th June, 2018. Hence, I am requesting you to kindly change our arrival date to the 15th of June and checkout date to the 19th of June at 12 pm. The taxi booking should also be changed according to our plans.

I regret the inconvenience caused to you due to the above changes.

I look forward to a positive reply from your end.

Yours sincerely,

Vikas Gupta

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...booking reference number is -555555 for a ordinary room and as per the plan we we...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... on 20th october with my entire family. we all were very excited to visit your hot...
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the tour preparation. But suddenly my mother got cardiac arrest and now she i...
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Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t suddenly my mother got cardiac arrest and now she is in Hospital and doctors h...
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Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Hospital and doctors have advised us to be available for the next 48 Hours. S...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
... be available for the next 48 Hours. So therefore could you please change the planned tr...
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Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Hours. So therefore could you please change the planned trip from 20th octobe...
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Line 8, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or us due to changing weather conditions . Hoping for a positive response from ...
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Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...de. Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana .
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs faithfully, Kushal Rana .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9025974026 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42442473707 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8239290973 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308066212482 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108423629256 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506985112559 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141295419444 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364190091204 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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