You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-
Give details for the booking which you have made
Inform changes that you want with your booking
State reasons for the changes.
Dear sir, or Madam,
I am writing to request change in the scheduled visit of 15th october to your hotel due to some unavoidable circumstances. I have booked your hotel with reference number -2252552 with customer name-Kushal rana.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. Everything was going according to our plan and we were almost done with the packing and other stuff, but fortunately i got a request from my Manager to be part of our Journey and i couldn't turn it down.
Therefore, please update our booking details, we will arrive on 18th october instead 15th and will check out from your hotel on 24th before 12:00 PM. we are expecting two more bedrooms with attached bathrooms, with hot water and air cooler facilities. I would really appreciate if the rooms are on the same floor.
Could you please also share information about recreational activities in the vicinity. my manager is very lively and would love to go to the theatre, beach and amusement parks,if available.
please notify me of the updated cost that will incur on our trip at your earliest with the facilities you can offer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Kushal Rana
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, or Madam, I am writing to request change in the sc...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...acking and other stuff, but fortunately i got a request from my Manager to be par...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...Manager to be part of our Journey and i couldnt turn it down. Therefore, please upd...
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...ecreational activities in the vicinity. my manager is very lively and would love t...
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...o the theatre, beach and amusement parks,if available. please notify me of the ...
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...beach and amusement parks,if available. please notify me of the updated cost tha...
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Suggestion: Please
...h and amusement parks,if available. please notify me of the updated cost that will...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iest with the facilities you can offer. I look forward to hearing from you soon....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you soon. Regards, Kushal Rana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87623762376 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58530094996 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6965094907 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240406329723 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746845976132 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626387932986 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994448484684 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776092141981 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.