The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly, the popularity of electronic shops are increasing at an unprecedented rate. Some people believe that the traditional shops will not be able to survive in the future. I completely agree with this notion and i will put forward the reasons to support my agreement.
First and foremost, online purchasing is very convenient and provides us opportunity to shop 24x7 and there is no limitation of time like the old traditional shops, you can buy any item at any point of time. it is not only helpful for those people who work at home but also for the working professionals who hardly get any spare time. it provides a very sound mechanism to track the ordered goods and services. For instance, Amazon India updates their customers about each movement of the product and even the customer can schedule the delivery time.
Secondly, e-commerce companies provides a wide variety of goods and services at discounted rates, which helps the customer to choose the product and services as per their preferences. The e-commerce companies have a minimal expense in terms of manpower and infrastructure as a result they are in a better position to sell their products at competitive rates. On the other hand, the conventional shop owners have to bear various expenses such as electricity expenses and rent of premises. A recent study has indicated that local shop owners have to spend half of their income on rent and other charges.
Finally, a majority of e-commerce companies are providing a facility to purchase on credit on easy monthly payments, which is almost impossible for the customers to get from local shops and this is also the biggest reason for the fall of local shops.
In conclusion, the online shopping will become more and more popular because of the convenience, reasonable prices and attractive payment options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08552631579 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81442877846 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8082714549 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160547705436 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561107857739 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403377759962 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096619304331 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033562614079 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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