Essay Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative developments ?
there is no doubt that Internet and Television are providing immense opportunities to common people to become popular. some people strongly believe that these changes have significant positive effects on the general class where some other have totally opposite views. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail.
With the advancement in technology, the online platforms such as Youtube, Twitter and Facebook have provided many chances to those people, who belongs to the deprived section of society. For instance, Nowadays many professionals are approaching to a huge section of students globally with their skills and talent through You tube, where they simply upload videos and the audience can have the knowledge in few seconds. In turn, with fame, they earn a good sum of money. Furthermore, in the recent past, it was almost impossible for a small-scale businessman to reach the consumers those who are living far away from the countryside, but now the tv channels have made this possible. They have started approaching people those who have unique qualities to demonstrate and which can be useful for the viewers and in this way the business owner spread information about their product , their interactions with channels works like an advertisement.
Beside the positives, there are few negatives associated with social media, if not used prudently. many time , tv channels broadcast the personal issues publically, to earn cheap publicity and in turn it tarnish the reputation of a person. Moreover, millions of people are using social media and many time people share some contents in ignorance which can hurt the sentiments of a community or an individual. In addition to this, the act of a person through social media can become a life threatening issue for him. In a recent incident, where an engineer posted some communal images to earn popularity, which was insolent in nature, has to go behind the bars.
In conclusion, if we use these modern platforms sensibly, then these are the most easy and affordable way to showcase your ability and talent to the world but at the same time if it is not used with caution, it can have harmful effects as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73094766525 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580555555556 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5120107555 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176459536467 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605183117597 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512726259535 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108827355382 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854979231763 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.