Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative developments ?
there is no doubt, that Television and internet has become the most prominent ways to get popularity. Many people believe that it has several benefits for individuals and society while some other have totally opposite views. this essay will discuss the both side of argument in detail.
firstly, a majority of people have opinion that it's a great change, if a person from economically deprived section get chance to shine because it is acceptable fact that position brings wealth. For instance, a reality show has recently declared its winner from UK and they have given him a huge some of money as prize. it clearly shows that the media influences such as Tv and internet can bring prosperity in the lives of people. In addition to this, it is a human tendency that he always want to contribute back to community if he is successful and applies in the above scenario.
Beside the advantages, there few concerns which must be taken into consideration. In the current trend, people do multiple things to become known. For example, several police man uploaded their videos on social media sites while on duty and they had to face termination. In the same manner , a women uploaded a clip of a intelligence officer while he was performing his obligations and the lady who did this act was not aware that the officer's identity is confidential and her action could create a serious life threat to that officer.
In conclusion, there is nothing wrong if we use these way of communication sensibly. In my views , if we use these medium effectively, they can open new ways for us to achieve our dreams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81454545455 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68822927833 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8536258552 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172740395636 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526385829379 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502891838772 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912501952882 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689664051154 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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