Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works of art, and not show the culture or artworks from other countries. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Museums and art galleries are ones of the places which preserve nation's heritage and culture. While some people argues that those places should entirely focus on the work of their own nations, others believe that it should include the work from different places around the world.
One of the reasons places of exhibition should concentrate on work of their own countries because tourists have these places on top of their go to list, and it gives them opportunity to learn more about nations precious art. I believe art is pure in its form and it is a medium to express our ideas and thoughts freely. An artist does not draw a painting by limiting himself to the locality of his origin. He simply pours his expressions and feelings on a piece of paper with different shades of color. These shades and sketches depict the painter’s vision of history, or reality. Such a masterpiece should not be restricted only to local origins; rather, it should be showcased in front of a global audience.
Moreover, when we allow arts and sculptures from a foreign country we are connecting the nations all over the worlds. Each culture has something new to teach. For example, in one of the child museums in India, there are paintings of small children dressed as Zombies. These paintings depict the Halloween festival which is very famous among children in America. Children in India are delighted to know about such festival. Similarly, we have Madame Tussads, a popular celebrity museum in England. The museum hosts wax statues of several famous personalities of all over the world. For example, it hosts the statue of Mahatma Gandhi describing the work he did for achieving India’s independence.
To conclude, museums and art galleries should not be restricted only to local origins and should depict the cultures and artworks of other countries too. This not only helps in buildings relations with other countries but also teaches people to respect and appreciate other cultures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63599614297 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9398445143 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26762930278 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716889057881 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815936770555 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173739910038 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663004003826 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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