Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the challenges that I am facing during the night course running in computer department.
Presently I am working in an IT company from past 2 years. From promotion point of view I had to acquire a certification in Hardware and Networking for which I enrolled myself with your institution. Though your brochure has all the things mentioned that is needed for knowledge perspective but on ground level there exists an enormous gap.
Basically, it was mentioned that practical labs are opened for trainees throughout the week even in late hours. However, a week has been passed but no practical is provided and it is closed by 5 in the evening. Moreover, the instructor said 6 hour workshop will be provided on this weekend but again we have to attend a theory class as lab keys are not available.
Such a compromise with course is not acceptable at all, as primary focus is to take practicals because theory work could be done online too. Hence, it's a request not only from me but from other batchmates too for making the necessary arrangements.
I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take a prompt action on priority.
Yours faithfully,
Roman Took.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...epartment. Presently I am working in an IT company from past 2 years. From promoti...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ent. Presently I am working in an IT company from past 2 years. From promotion point...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'workshop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'workshops'.
Suggestion: workshops
...g. Moreover, the instructor said 6 hour workshop will be provided on this weekend but ag...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y work could be done online too. Hence, its a request not only from me but from oth...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78116613198 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680751173709 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7497680883 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915761567912 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302970501327 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398329794332 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546465641153 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477962235449 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.