Entertainmanet industry, especially in the field of video games is growing by leaps and bounds. A significant proportion of the people are spending an overwhelming amount of time on handheld devices for playing. Although, some people may find it to be a vital source of enjoyment, but, in my opine this has serious repercussions on person himself and to the society.
There are innumerable factors that are sufficient to highlight the negative aspects of games available on compact gadgets. The leading of all is severe health ailments. Since, these handy gadgets are portable and even cheaper, majority of the people can afford it. Initially they started playing games as a source of enjoyment or to kill time, but, gradually they are addicted of playing. Due to it, they become a victim of disorders such as obesity, eye sight weakness, stress, etc. As a mater of fact, WHO earlier stated that around 45% of the vision issues are the sideffects of playing games on mobiles. Moreover, due to overusage people are becoming lethargic and conflicts are rising between families.
On the opposite angle there exists certain postive results, that indicates gaming on handy consoles to be beneficial. On the top of all is brain storming. There are certain games like Chess, Calculation, etc, which provides excellent results to users who spend an adequate time. Other than this, it could be a good way to socialize. This is because many of the games like PubG, Call of Duty, etc, are played online in groups and these goups are made from different people from various regions. Hence, it could help people to make friends and build relations across world.
Considering and keenly examining the above-cited information it can be recapitulated that, inspite of certain merits of playing games on handy devices, demerits eclipsed them largely. In order to absorb maximum advantages, there is a need to force restrictions on contents as well as on play time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
... a victim of disorders such as obesity, eye sight weakness, stress, etc. As a mater of fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72407469859 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4232135656 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156425836908 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423886111535 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403453182058 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879476864878 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027921300576 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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