When it comes to money and free time, there comes a debate to prioritize what ? Majority of people believe that its better to earn more but talking about intellectuals they always favor the time. Although, in my perception free time plays an indispensable role, I would discuss both these ideas.
Money plays a pivotal role in people life, because in exchange of it they could avail numerous facilities. Unfortunately, people are oblivious to the fact that health is wealth. If instead of running for enormous income, people start focusing on health this would benefits them with valuable advantages. As ultimately, people are saving a significant proportion for medical expenses but taking care of health in early stages would make them reluctant to health disorders. Even, there are certain severe ailments that money can't afford for an instance there is no solution to Paralysis attack. Thus, giving less emphasize to money could enable them to enjoy a better life without working as machine, that majority of people are doing.
On the opposite angle, a significant proportion of people accord that if they have a sound income than they could afford lucrative items. Like, someone wants to buy an elite class car such as Ferrari, but in my perception these things are insignificant without a prosperous health. Moreover, looking on the primary purpose of car which is travelling at ease could be availed by a low budget too. One of the e-commerce giant Amazon whose billionaire owner is Jeff Bezzo after his divorce said, I ran for money with no time for my family due to which I lost them. Hence, one has to earn for necessity rather than show off.
To recapitulate it can be implicated that, people must understand the importance of free time. Instead of working day and night for ample money they should rather focus on quality time with low budget which is the utmost important thing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ple start focusing on health this would benefits them with valuable advantages. As ultim...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... are certain severe ailments that money cant afford for an instance there is no solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as to, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97492163009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5920532854 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8574722515 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230335574222 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717534819028 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626675060926 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152218108254 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935346440096 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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