You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter introduce yourself explain the problem Provide an appropriate solution

Essay topics:

You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the problem
-Provide an appropriate solution

Dear Rama,
I'm writing this letter to you to draw your attention towards debris which is being left near my house regularly.
My name is Rehan and I've been living in this tower for last 2 years. My flat is in the rose tower adjacent to your house.
It's in my observation from past many days that your maid is placing rubbish collected from your apartment in front of the gate. Likewise, it has become a store house of plethora of insects which may propel to epidemic in our vicinity. Moreover, the place always experiences unpleasant smell.
However, there are various ways through them you can manage it. Firstly, our society give the facility of door step collection with nominal monthly fee. Secondly, you can also keep it in the dustbin at the ground floor. It's regular collected by the cleaning staff.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. For the more it will help our society to be a more pleasant place to live.
Yours sincerely,
John

Votes
Average: 7.9 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear Rama, Im writing this letter to you to draw your...
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Suggestion: I've
...house regularly. My name is Rehan and Ive been living in this tower for last 2 ye...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...he rose tower adjacent to your house. Its in my observation from past many days t...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...easant place to live. Yours sincerely, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, likewise, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67251461988 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35124084354 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7472588365 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4615384615 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191210920083 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645475062421 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805864834286 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901605290118 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593605915499 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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