You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Teena,
How have you been up to? It's been a long time hearing from you. As you know I have been selected for Masters degree scholarship in Imperial college London. In order to pay my expenses I have to do a part-time job as I will hold a right to work for sometime of the week.
my university has offered me a study plan effected from 12th dec 2020 to dec.2022. I have to make up my mind accordingly to join my higher education and have to complete my documentation required for entering the U.K.
I will be living with you in the mean time, however, I would not like to bother you a lot about my expense. Besides that in the beginning, I will need your help in locating a job near by your house or my institute. Although, I will have some cash in hand but in the long-term I have to get a part-time position so that I would be able to pay my travel cost, some money in hand for lunch and avail library service for photocopying relevant documents.
As you have better understanding of your locality, I would require your assistance to finding a job in the vicinity. I am really good at communication and have a knack of taking people with myself. So, I believe I will be a feisty candidate as receptionist , administrator or customer services jobs. Hope it will help you to find a part-time vacancy for me.
pay my regards to your family. See you soon!
Yours sincerely,
mmmm
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ight to work for sometime of the week. my university has offered me a study plan ...
^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mentation required for entering the U.K. I will be living with you in the mean ti...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...I will need your help in locating a job near by your house or my institute. Although, I...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll be a feisty candidate as receptionist , administrator or customer services jobs...
^^
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...or customer services jobs. Hope it will help you to find a part-time vacancy for me. pay my reg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pay
...ou to find a part-time vacancy for me. pay my regards to your family. See you soon...
^^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee you soon! Yours sincerely, mmmm
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, however, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40540540541 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71276567973 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8200413075 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310272537827 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122907558088 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734173210094 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181939263622 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698450882538 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.