Dear ABC,
I hope you are doing great my amigo. I am planning to come to Canada next month for masters. I would need your help as I need to get a part-time job while doing post-graduation. I am going to elaborate you about my plans further.
I am interested in pursuing my post-graduation in power systems and control. I have found the University of Alberta providing this course at a great price and as I need to prove my credentials. I want to do a part-time job in any Industrial firm dealing in Automation for power systems so that I can get some extra credentials and get some experience of working in this field.
I know you must be busy in your own stuff but I need your favor in this because I know you work in SIEMENS PVT. LTD that deals in power system technology and they need a trainee so you can help me get this part-time job easily.
it will be a great thing as I will be able to complete my masters on time and can get a permanent job.
I will be looking forward from you and it will be a big help for me in my journey.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t-time job while doing post-graduation. I am going to elaborate you about my plan...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...laborate you about my plans further. I am interested in pursuing my post-gradu...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...raduation in power systems and control. I have found the University of Alberta pr...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and as I need to prove my credentials. I want to do a part-time job in any Indus...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...experience of working in this field. I know you must be busy in your own stuff...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lp me get this part-time job easily. it will be a great thing as I will be able...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20289855072 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66162093525 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5698129429 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275954272617 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109744264491 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740035785162 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154017680083 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105567726605 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.