It is look like a year since I met you in your goodbye party. I am so proud of you when I hear about your success to get promotion as a construction site manager.
Recently I am planning to move to your city for about two years in order to study. I have gotten an acceptation from Sydney University for master by research full time course, which will start in July.
Actually, I am going to apply for a casual job as long as I can stay there. As you know an international student should spend much more money than a local pupil. I am accounting to some income that I will earn to cover a part of my daily routine.
I had tried to feel couple of job applications, but in most of them they ask me to provide a reference letter. Since you know me and my expert, do you think can you write it for me? It would be really helpful. I will so appreciate it and I hope I can do something for you instead.
Take care and write me back.
With lots of love and best wishes.
Imm
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ydney University for master by research full time course, which will start in July. A...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...casual job as long as I can stay there. As you know an international student shoul...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10362694301 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40241361627 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.141232988 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9230769231 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336444791623 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997921888118 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779661767705 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127941086069 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10389684022 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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