You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi everybody! my name is Oanh. It's hornor for me to be here for interview today. now I would like to introduce about myself. I'm 34 years old, and living in Hanoi. I have 12 years working in accounting Management and Financial accounting in Manufacturing Company (employee volums from 5,000 to 12,000 employees). my strong points are deeply understand about Product' cost, Budget, handle effectively process of Sales, Payment, Internal Control. Beside that, I have strong mind improvement and efficency. I can work under presure to meet deadline. That's general information. now I'm ready for your question in details.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
Hi everybody! my name is Oanh. Its hornor for me to be h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
... for me to be here for interview today. now I would like to introduce about myself....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... would like to introduce about myself. Im 34 years old, and living in Hanoi. I ha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... volums from 5,000 to 12,000 employees. my strong points are deeply understand abo...
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Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... employees. my strong points are deeply understand about Product cost, Budget, handle effe...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...an work under presure to meet deadline. Thats general information. now Im ready for y...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...et deadline. Thats general information. now Im ready for your question in details. ...
^^^
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...eadline. Thats general information. now Im ready for your question in details.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 516.0 937.175257732 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 206.0 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21212121212 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 3.78020617076 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85924609572 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 127.690721649 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.787878787879 0.622605031667 127% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9275594045 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.6 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 9.9 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 4.34317383033 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569692235296 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228270885341 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335918380796 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569692235296 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.46 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.