You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Navneet,
How are you? I hope you are doing well in your life. I am writing this epistle to you in search of a job in Ontario, Canada. As you may remember that I am planning to travel there in coming month for the education purpose.
I am taking a course in master’s in microbiology from Ontario university and the course duration is 1-year fulltime course and it will help me become a professional microbiologist for any food and medicinal industry. However, the fee structure of the course is quite high as compare to Indian economy, therefore I have decided to work part-time for some food industry to earn some money as well as to gain experience which latter will help in getting a good job.
You are working in the same field, so I think you are right person to help me in searching job. I want you to discuss with your friends also of similar profile to find the job as early as possible.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and support me in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Navneet, How are you? I hope you are doing well i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...umstance and support me in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you. B...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56315789474 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65046381767 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2784088645 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341287710218 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138673971001 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085852395687 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216975892007 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111591539268 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.