You are going to shift in a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend explaining him/her
. why are you shifting to new apartment
. Describe the apartment
. Invite him/her to your apartment
Dear Malisa
Hope, you are having a wonderful time with your family and this letter of mine will find you in a good health. I am penning this epistle to tell you that I have found a new apartment and going to shift on coming Sunday.
As you already know that my previous house was far away from my office and it took two hours for travelling from room to office and back to apartment. I was tired of travelling as well as lot of time got wasted in it. I was not able to invest time for myself. Beside that I had to spend money on travelling.
But now I have rented a 1BHK flat which is at walkable distance from office. I will be able to save money as well as time. It is a beautiful apartment having bedroom with balcony and attached washroom, small hall and a kitchen. Property is situated by the side of road so all the facilities like ATM, supermarkets, bus stop, shopping malls are easily accessible.
I am waiting for your visit to Bangalore so that we can stay together in my new house and will have a wonderful time. I will cook delicious dishes for you. Visit to my place as soon as you get time. Say Hello to your parents and lots of love to Flora!!!!!!!
Yours truly
Watson
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27192982456 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36103461575 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5217623928 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182198171227 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542106889658 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606026925287 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105468848439 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834654045201 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.