You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend

Essay topics:

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• tell your friend why you are having a party
• explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe
• invite your friend to the party

Dear Sarah,
Hope you are doing well and have settled down in your new job. I’m planning to host a party for a few family members and friends on the 11th of September 2021.

I’ve finally got through with my visa formalities to re-locate to Finland and will be leaving by the end of September 2021. Before leaving I wanted to bid goodbyes to my loved ones and create some fond memories to take along with me, as I do not know when I would be visiting next.

I’ve arranged for food with a group of caterers but I was thinking of trying my hand at cooking something special for the guests. I would love to prepare your famous roast chicken and was wondering if you could please help me with the recipe. It is the best among all your creations and I remember how all of us would devour it during our college hostel days.

I know that you are busy figuring out your new roles and responsibilities, but it would be great if you could come over to my place a day or two in advance and return after the party. It would be a good break for the both of us and have fun cooking just like the old days.

Eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours lovingly
Naadhya

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30769230769 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25764196385 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7479620645 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5454545455 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317880476831 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123526193764 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666964234458 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176278131348 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083963415282 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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