MUSEUMS AND ART GALLERIES SHOULD CONCENTRATE ON WORKS THAT SHOW HISTORY AND CULTURE OF THEIR OWN COUNTRY RATHER THAN WORKS OF THE OTHER PARTS IN THE WORLD. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
There is a view that a country’s cultural heritage and past history ought to be reflected by works exhibited in museums and art galleries and should avoid showing the creations of other countries. In my opinion, I agree that displaying a nation’s accomplishments can go a long way in educating its countrymen, promoting the prestige of the nation and attracting tourists.
To begin with, focusing on showing indigenous works of a country by way of museums and galleries can help increase awareness among the its citizens, especially young generation, about the achievements of a country. For instance, in India, where millenials are nowadays hugely influenced by the western culture, going to such public places and learning about the battles fought to achieve independence, victories of brave emperors, and inventions of that time period, would educate them about their history and instill patriotism in their minds.
Another point to consider is that exhibition of cultural and history belonging to a country proves beneficial in terms of making it unique and thereby increasing the tourist trade. In other words, tourists are drawn towards museums and art galleries in order to see host country’s accomplishments and achievements and learn about its cultural practices. This uniqueness could bring tremendous advantages to the host county’s economy by way of foreign exchange. To cite an example, museums in France, Italy, and in many other European countries, are among the most favorite tourist attractions because of their ability to show their unique culture.
To conclude, when people visit museums and galleries and see their country’s they gain a lot of knowledge and insight into country’s past and its culture, along with huge financial benefits for the nation.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41785714286 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95991717686 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0050502732 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.555555556 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261734316179 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110370418148 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905163051048 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158298309434 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507788250236 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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