You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say where and when the class will be held
• give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
• suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear…
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm writing this letter to invite you to accompany me with a newly introduced cooking class.
As I told you, the cooking class will commence at Nixon College, where we studied linguistic course last time. The class is scheduled to begin next month the 20th.
Although, cooking has never been your favourite subject, it will definitely help you out as you are getting married soon and it would be beneficial for your married life. Also, you'll learn a variety of techniques to run a food business such as a restaurant or a Pizza company.
While we already had a plan to meet coming Monday, I would suggest you to give a thought to my advice. We can meet up at Pizza Hutt and discuss the chance if we can collaborate together to take cooking classes.
I hope you will consider my suggestion
Yours Truly,
Khan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...radiant health and the best of spirits. Im writing this letter to invite you to ac...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...beneficial for your married life. Also, youll learn a variety of techniques to run a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67701863354 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44471292227 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8041848322 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337393866876 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123770845186 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799622244113 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159935559739 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475987030726 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.