Some people prefer to buy local products, while others prefer to buy international products. What is your opinion on that?
Opinions are divided on whether local or foreign-made products ought to be preferred while shopping. I agree with both views, however, preference while purchasing should be given to locally made products.
There are several compelling reasons for those who advocate for buying locally manufactured goods. Firstly, it helps boost local economy by encouraging consumers to buy native products such as handicrafts, thereby helping local entrepreneurs to flourish their businesses and helps in promoting their products. For example, although, Football is natively designed and manufactured in Pakistan, it is widely exported as well used to promote domestic games in the country, thus helping boost local as well as country economy. Another reason some people prefer local goods is because of their quality, as most of them are hand-made and finely stitched by skilled craftsmen, as compared to international products which are mostly machine ready.
However, some people argue that goods manufactured internationally should always be preferred. First reason behind their thinking is that globally renowned brands such as Nike, Adidas, Luis Viton produce quality products for their customers. They use materials which are unique and of premium quality and are long-lasting. In addition, if someone buys and wears famous brands, it boosts their overall social and economic status. To illustrate, if one is wearing a Nike outfit with Gucci glasses, he will stand out in public and people will desire to be dressed like him. Therefore, excellence in quality and good reputation are main reasons why people adore overseas brands.
In conclusion, numerous factors influence people to buy a variety of products of local and foreign origin. Despite the advantages of international brands, one should prefer local market products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58273381295 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79979998842 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0336939581 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308100189637 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105252111752 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819469574742 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21477049205 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883139318524 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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