The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solutions can you suggest?
The gap between rich and poor people is increasing at an alarming rate due to unequal distribution of wealth in society. While it can cause many socio-economic issues in society, many solutions could be suggested to mitigate the problems.
There are several issues cased by an increase in gap between rich and poor. Firstly, education has become inaccessible to impoverished members of society. Quality education is the basic human right of every child born in a country. It is also not in reach of masses due to which, these people are unable to compete for high paying jobs and thus, it becomes a significant disadvantage for them. Another important effect is the increase in crime rates. As marginalised groups often do not make enough money for their living, they resort to heinous acts such as burglary and theft etc.
Although these problems are critical, it is possible to find solutions. First of all, government should introduce financial schemes and provide scholarships and bursaries for student from less-fortunate communities, which will help a wider section of society to get quality education they deserve. This will give them a fair chance to compete with the rich. Another solution would be by providing employment opportunities to under developed people. This will ultimately increase their income and level of living, consequently, reducing crime rates. For example, the government of Pakistan has introduced many schemes to help the needy people of country, such as Benazir Income Support Programme.
In conclusion, widening gap between rich and poor has caused many pressing issues in society, which can be ameliorated by providing educational and employment chances to poor people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32841328413 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88157625379 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4507463938 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172100145056 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571558679537 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785931830962 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135359339371 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854817686551 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.