You are attending a part time course in a college. Due to some problem, you cannot continue your course. Write a letter to your teacher
- Describe the course
- Explain the problem
- Explain the reason for not continuing
- Tell the teacher about your future plans
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing this letter with regard to my inability to continue the part-time course, “Introduction to the Chemistry”, which I was doing in the evenings at Crescent College.
The reason behind discontinuing my course is that my Mother is unable to keep herself up in good health because of her heart problem. Last night, she had a second heart-attack, which almost killed her.
Although she is in decent health now, the Doctor has advised me that if she is not given medication on time, there is a chance that she could die at any moment. Moreover, I cannot afford to keep a nurse at out house as we are not that opulent. Hence, It is necessary that I am all time available to my mother in case of medical need.
However, as soon as my mother gets better in health, I would be able to rejoin my course. I have no intention to leave the course permanently, as it will cause great loss to my professional career. So, I would definitely like to take this course in the August Session.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience I have caused to you.
Yours sincerely,
M Khan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.615 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8808635858 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9554034948 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15448588968 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551877316135 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450244555931 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732108026253 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330473333523 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.