You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor.
In the letter, you should:
• explain that an article contains wrong information
• supply the correction information instead
• provide some more interesting information for the editor to publish in the future.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding an article about Pakistan that was published in your magazine last week and contained some incorrect information.
The information was related to some facts and figures. According to your correspondent, the country’s population has increased to 197 million and out of it, 50 million people are illiterate, whereas 30 million people are educated and remaining are students, which is wrong. It also says the country’s surface area is 881897 square kilometers but the actual number is different.
Actually, the fact is that the number people are approximately more than 200 million; 197 million was in 2016. Literary rate has also risen during these years and it is almost 60 million. Furthermore, the number of uneducated people and area are 27 million and 881997 square kilometers, respectively.
I would also like to bring it to your knowledge that recently an island has been discovered near Karachi, which is the largest city of Pakistan, and its area approximation is 6700 square miles. It was revealed during recent oil exploration activity by a Chinese company. Some experts also believe that owing to the Chinese involvement in the country, it seems that its population might grow more rapidly in the future.
I am looking forward for your swift and favorable action and hope that the above misleading information would be rectified and republished.
Yours faithfully,
Salman Khan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34199134199 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95693495496 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2639510991 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141459565155 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050425674543 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729082530555 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936950534951 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101448863757 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.