You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. In the letter, you should: – explain that an article contains wrong information – supply the correction information instead – provide some more interesting information for the editor to publish in the future.
Dear Mr. Hanson,
I am writing this letter regarding an article published in the last month magazine related to my homeland Panjab. However, it was informative but some of the details are not appropriate.
Actually, the name Panjab it comes from the five rivers which were in the state and five is called panj in my native language. Basically, it means the land of rivers. While it was written wrong that the name of the state is due to the emperor who ruled there in ancient times.
I would also like to tell you some interesting facts that now there are only two rivers in the Panjab which is in India and three are in Pakistan. The river named Raavi is a borderline between the two countries. Hence, the land of the rivers is suffering from the serious issue of lacking water rapidly these days, you will find multiple causes behind the problem. I would appreciate if you could correct the given information and address the current situation which would be helpful for the awareness of people.
Thank you for your consideration in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Evans
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Panjab. However, it was informative but some of the details are not appropriate. Actually...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Basically, it means the land of rivers. While it was written wrong that the name of t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82978723404 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47163056972 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3247237003 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212082129239 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668244137107 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548361353638 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127513196881 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071768565095 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.