You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club to introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, and tell him/her when you think you could start.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about part-time job vacancies in your football club.
I am a student and pursuing my Bachelor of Physical Education from Darwin College, Bathing. Currently, I am in sophomore year with special attention towards football and cricket this year.
Since my childhood, I have been interested in outdoor sports, and in school time I was captained of the football team. Moreover, with the help of a physical trainer, I have participated in many athletic meets organized by school and also have good leadership and patience qualities.
Now, my exams are around the corner, and after format, I will be totally free and would be readily available to take up this job. This job will help me in broadening the horizons of my knowledge about sports will increase my future credibility for employment.
Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side.
Thanking You,
Yours faithfully
Rohan Sharma
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1835443038 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73166346001 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6650164612 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170147712649 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659214821923 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611400890416 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081439170237 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757300983882 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.