I looked at your advertisement in Deccan chronicle newspaper today about the part time jobs available in various fields. I would like to apply for the post of part time teacher in reputed preschool/Montessori in Chennai.
My name is Preethi and I have completed my post graduate in business management and recently completed a course in teacher training course in Internal Montessori Academy. I was working in Zhu Shan logistic as Business admin support for 2years and had to take a break due to child care.
I would prefer to teach for nursey or primary kids and comfortable working from 8.30am to 1.00pm. Myself along with 2 of my friends held a camp during the summer vacation at kidzee school for 2months and nurtured the children in drawing, painting, storing telling, phonic learning and various cognitive learning activities. We were also awarded as the best Summer Camp team by the International Montessori academy in Feb 2019.
I am also enclosing my resume for your perusal. Awaiting for your call for any opening at nursey or primary academy. I am passionate about this job and would love teach the younger generation kids and share my best knowledge to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...can chronicle newspaper today about the part time jobs available in various fields. I wou...
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Suggestion: part-time
.... I would like to apply for the post of part time teacher in reputed preschool/Montessori...
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Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...o enclosing my resume for your perusal. Awaiting for your call for any opening at nursey or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84088103241 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6734727076 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131423758694 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562454985092 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435968571375 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864191283036 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620403085558 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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