You are looking for a part time job.Write a letter to an employment agency.In your letter Introduce your self explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skill you have

Essay topics:

You are looking for a part time job.Write a letter to an employment agency.In your letter
Introduce your self
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skill you have

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to apply for a part time job through your agency.Currently I am a undergraduate student at university of Colombo whom studying information technology degree furthermore I am final year student.

Actually, I would desire to gain my knowledge about software engineering field.Therefore i will hope to apply for a part time job related with software industry as a trainee software engineer or associate software engineer and also I will able to work 20 hours per week.

I have six months part time work experience in most reputed company in the software field and also i engage with develop financial applications using Microsoft .Net Technologies.Furthermore I would like to say I am good team player whom properly collaborate with each other person.

Finally, I attach my resume with this letter and i would hope to get positive feedback about my request.
Thank you for wast your time to looking my letter and resume.

your faithfully,
Mohan

Votes
Average: 6.6 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Dear Sir/Madam I would like to apply for a part time jo...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
...am I would like to apply for a part time job through your agency.Currently I am ...
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Suggestion: Currently
...for a part time job through your agency.Currently I am a undergraduate student at univers...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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... job through your agency.Currently I am a undergraduate student at university of ...
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...furthermore I am final year student. Actually, I would desire to gain my know...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...wledge about software engineering field.Therefore i will hope to apply for a part time jo...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...wledge about software engineering field.Therefore i will hope to apply for a part time jo...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut software engineering field.Therefore i will hope to apply for a part time job ...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ld.Therefore i will hope to apply for a part time job related with software industry as ...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...me job related with software industry as a trainee software engineer or associat...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...industry as a trainee software engineer or associate software engineer and also ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...I will able to work 20 hours per week. I have six months part time work ex...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rs per week. I have six months part time work experience in most reputed company...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... company in the software field and also i engage with develop financial applicati...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...p financial applications using Microsoft .Net Technologies.Furthermore I would lik...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Net
...financial applications using Microsoft .Net Technologies.Furthermore I would like t...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...tions using Microsoft .Net Technologies.Furthermore I would like to say I am good team pla...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...tions using Microsoft .Net Technologies.Furthermore I would like to say I am good team pla...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nologies.Furthermore I would like to say I am good team player whom properly coll...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ly collaborate with each other person. Finally, I attach my resume with th...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I attach my resume with this letter and i would hope to get positive feedback abo...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Your
...ime to looking my letter and resume. your faithfully, Mohan
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'look', 'so', 'therefore']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.333333333333 0.220444632235 151% => OK
Verbs: 0.130952380952 0.167888034529 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0606518309736 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0506257000042 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10119047619 0.118615021944 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10119047619 0.107062808482 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0238095238095 0.041066498444 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.33245756725 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0385302599488 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0416666666667 0.0714148451538 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0357142857143 0.0191574576366 186% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119047619048 0.00930345855455 128% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1008.0 1141.60824742 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.134020619 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3 5.53046319177 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3375 0.284621296913 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28125 0.211203875043 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2125 0.133321485273 159% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11875 0.0843313296314 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33245756725 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.488730381 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 12.9587628866 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 26.6666666667 16.4300151701 162% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.287624299 44.7399317507 231% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 90.9928171075 185% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 16.4300151701 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.613754768223 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.09278350515 1051% => OK
Readability: 54.7916666667 37.5504026743 146% => OK
Elegance: 1.67391304348 1.13073093955 148% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298362554222 0.331212695627 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15607219311 0.0927372745006 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076208881799 0.0736520305886 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.579516596996 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.48253415325e-16 0.180689518051 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157849469101 0.122183219658 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909404533222 0.0765303033291 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.161372752337 0.211926503985 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0635633567206 0.0737400523855 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17235843177 0.203819188451 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947235950381 0.067151250289 141% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 8.32989690722 60% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Currently I am a undergraduate student at university of Colombo whom studying information technology degree furthermore I am final year student.
Currently I am an undergraduate student at university of Colombo who is studying information technology degree, furthermore I am a final year student.

i engage with develop financial applications
i engage with developing financial applications

I am good team player whom properly collaborate with each other person.
I am a good team player who properly collaborates with each other person.

Thank you for wast your time to looking my letter and resume.
Thank you for wasting your time to look my letter and resume.

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2

Read a good grammar book.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 164 250
No. of Characters: 792 1500
No. of Different Words: 103 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.579 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.829 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.773 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.573 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.453 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.939 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.239 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5