Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.Explain the why the center is i

Essay topics:

Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,

Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to explain about the necessity of a sport and leisure center to the society which it is maintaining by your department. I saw paper article on 24th November that your commissioner said they will hope to close sport center which is located at city area.

Actually, I would like to say the most of the time, I am going to this place with my family and friends. Furthermore, we use this common property to doing some activities such as Indoor cricket, Tennis, watching movies and so on.

Our community is near to this center, are used to this place to enjoy and physically stay their good health in the life. Therefore this place is the most important and valuable one for our society.

Finally, I would like to say if you are hope to close this center in next year, there are so many health problems occur related with not enough exercise and should have to pay more money for private places to enjoy their life.
Please concern our situation and I will hope you are getting good decision related with closed sport center.

Thank you.
Yours faithfully
mohan

Votes
Average: 7.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... many health problems occur related with not enough exercise and should have to p...
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...hould have to pay more money for private places to enjoy their life. Please conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35248154345 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0951774682 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216280464818 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909073903268 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650298249306 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109994548939 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786567196329 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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to close sport center
to close the sport center

Our community is near to this center, are used to this place
Our community which is near to this center is using this place

if you are hope to close this center
if you hope to close this center

related with closed sport center.
related with closing the sport center.

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 195 250
No. of Characters: 867 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.446 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.244 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.272 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.735 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5