You are staying in rented accommodation. You recently held a party to celebrate your birthday. Several neighbours have complained about the noise to your landlord.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
apologize for the disturbance
explain the situation
say how you will remedy the situation
Dear Mr Jones
I am writing to apologize for the incident last week when some of my neighbors complained to you. I am most embarrassed about this, because I am normally a quiet person and I do respect the privacy of my neighbors.
The reason for the excessive noise was that it was my 30th birthday party and my girlfriend threw a surprise party for me. She had invited around 20 of my friends to help me celebrate the big day and perhaps she did not realize how much noise would be made by the traveling disco she had hired. I would also explain that after I had got over the shock, I did knock on the door of my immediate neighbors to ask if they wanted to come round and offering to turn the music down after 11 o’clock. Unfortunately, I did not think of inviting the other residents of the block.
Once again, please accept my apologies and rest assured that this situation will not be repeated. I have since personally apologized to my neighbors, who were all very understanding.
Thanks
Yours sincerely
Mohan
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 187 250
No. of Characters: 811 1200
No. of Different Words: 123 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.337 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.541 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.385 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.723 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e personally apologized to my neighbors, who were all very understanding. Than...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56989247312 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68231620254 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9261262804 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12772881757 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558187664171 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054182706346 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626140229434 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145645378825 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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