Nowadays,there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world.what are the main cause for it? What can be solution,in your opinion ?
Nowadays, the rubbish volume is rapidly raised around the world because not respectable methods for release garbage items to the environment, as a result of that, environmental problems are increasing day by day.
First of all, in my perspective, I would like to say one of the main reasons for accelerated unwanted things, as a result of production environment. For an example, number of companies are increasing rapidly in the world, therefore they release rubbish to the environment and also gradually increase their production count to achieve the social needs.
Secondly, in my view, I would like to say increasing population is another big reason to build up garbage in the world. For an instance, we can get polyethylene item's usage among the people. Formerly, the most of people use polyethylene products in their life for a short time period and after they have released all polyethylene products to the environment without managing proper way.
Actually, we cannot stop social needs, therefore try to find any methods for managing rubbish in a proper way. Garbage, recycling is one of the better technique for managing unwanted items. For an example, Can use polyethylene product to reprocessing as a result of that, they use again and again. Furthermore, some specific rubbish we can use to make compost. Hence we can reduce garbage collection in the world.
As a conclusion, at the present time, there are so many problems are occurring due to the huge rubbish collection, such as environmental issues and medical issues therefore we will try to find good innovative methods for decrease rubbish collection in the world.
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Essay evaluation report
the rubbish volume is rapidly raised around the world because not respectable methods for release garbage items to the environment,
the rubbish volume is rapidly raised around the world because there are no respectable methods for releasing garbage items to the environment,
there are so many problems are occurring due to the huge rubbish collection,
there are so many problems which are occurring due to the huge rubbish collection,
methods for decrease rubbish collection in the world.
methods for decreasing rubbish collection in the world.
methods to decrease rubbish collection in the world.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 133 200 //a lot of duplicated words
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 267 350
No. of Characters: 1330 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.042 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.981 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.867 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.289 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.397 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.209 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s usage among the people. Formerly, the most of people use polyethylene products in their life...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o find any methods for managing rubbish in a proper way. Garbage, recycling is one of the bette...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...fic rubbish we can use to make compost. Hence we can reduce garbage collection in the...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242524916944 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.129568106312 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0963455149502 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046511627907 0.0437548338989 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132890365449 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0398671096346 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94663501533 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398671096346 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00332225913621 0.00163938923432 203% => OK
Determiners: 0.106312292359 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.021408717616 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1641.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14606741573 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408239700375 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307116104869 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209737827715 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14606741573 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94663501533 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.6358090767 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9450002317 49.517814964 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.814263465372 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 52.9616104869 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.86567164179 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331172793027 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143485095774 0.102741220458 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621622913401 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618539796186 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213176305402 0.148594505496 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150558915343 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630100081175 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354310531034 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0451481724962 0.0638462369009 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224922651641 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336100043496 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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