Dear Sir/Madam;
I have lived here for nearly twenty years and since I remember the local council has always provided people with leisure center along with different facilities. Recently, I have heard that the local council intends to close the West sports center to save money.
I am writing to explain that how much it is important for people around me to have this place at their disposal. All of my family members and most of my friends are using different sections such as tennis court, conference Hall, swimming pool at this center and this is the only place for people in this area to have access to sports facilities. If you think it is possible to build up another center, you have got another think coming, as I assure you there would be trials and tribulation to the matter.
If you do so, people would have to commute to the other side of the town in such heavily congested streets, and so some of them prefer to stay at home and they would change their lifestyle. Consequently, lots of health problem would occur.
I hope you think long and hard to make another decision considering people's welfare.
I look forward to hearing a positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Pooneh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...intends to close the West sports center so as to save money. I am writing to explain ...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
... I hope you think long and hard to make an other decision considering peoples welfare. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...orward to hearing a positive response. yours sincerely, Pooneh
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70283018868 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41156784838 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9461143662 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228388472718 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861485544884 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865695994509 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895698267498 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990546387604 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.