Dear Mr.Sharma,
I am writing this letter to inquire about housing accommodation in Mumbai. I will be arriving in Mumbai on 5th April, our flight will land at around 6:00 clock in evening. The reason for this shift is because I have been offered a new job at Powai and would like to have a house nearby.
My office location is at corporate centre therefore I would like to live at a maximum distance of 10Km so that my daily commute will not be time consuming. Also a colleague of mine has suggested "garden valley" society which is quite near to my workplace. It has all the amenities like shopping mall,school and park built within the society so we don't have to go far for daily needs.
My family including me consists of 4 members , my wife and two children. The house I am looking for should be 3bhk with a large dining hall and probably balcony in at least two rooms. Along with this a furnished house is also mandate as I am not bringing my household items and would like to buy new items over there. My parents regularly visit so if possible please try to get an apartment on 1st or 2nd floor so in case of lift failure there should not be any discomfort at my end.
Hopefully you can accommodate all my needs .
Thanks In Advance!!!
Regards
Gunjan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sharma
Dear Mr.Sharma, I am writing this letter to inquire...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...k in evening. The reason for this shift is because I have been offered a new job at Powai ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ily commute will not be time consuming. Also a colleague of mine has suggested &apos...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , school
...has all the amenities like shopping mall,school and park built within the society so we...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and park built within the society so we dont have to go far for daily needs. My f...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...amily including me consists of 4 members , my wife and two children. The house I a...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'mandated'.
Suggestion: mandated
...ong with this a furnished house is also mandate as I am not bringing my household items...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pefully you can accommodate all my needs . Thanks In Advance!!! Regards Gun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51931330472 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57549126845 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652360515021 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5058328797 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871904288392 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378963375856 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522334880233 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615311757159 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647953961062 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.