You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
When and why are you relocating.
what kind of house do you want?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the arrangement of accommodation. I would like you to find a house with the near proximity of company, where I am going to work in near future. I am planning to book a flight for the 23rd of October.
Let me explain it further, I am working in Pakistan telecommunication Pvt (Ltd), one of the largest telecom in Pakistan, as Assistant manager cost accounting. My skills in Cost Accounting are exceptional and top of the line. Recently, I came to know that there is incredible demand of it in Canada, where I will be able to enhance my abilities and work in a challenging environment with diversified workforce
Hence, I will need a house in suburb area of Toronto, where there will not be much noise. As per house amenities, it should be completely furnished, have private garage, laundry area, open kitchen and a study for children. It is a major plus if it will be near the main highway, which will decrease travel time to any major industry.
I am looking forward to your response, if you need any further information feel free to contact me on my mobile.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inquire about the arrang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.655 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94480899211 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3095769855 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130090340568 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511927207816 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474290946294 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812385899222 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059169812799 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.