You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
When and why are you relocating.
what kind of house do you want?
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">Dear Sir/Madam, </span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%"> I am writing to <span style="color:red">i</span>nquire about <span style="color:red">the</span> arrangement of accommodation. I would like you to
find a house with <span style="color:red">the </span>near proximity of company,where I am going to work in near future. I am planning to book a flight for <span style="color:red">the</span> 23<sup>rd</sup> of October.</span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">Let me explain it further, I am working in Pakistan telecommunication Pvt<span style="color:red"> (</span>Ltd), one of <span style="color:red">the</span> largest telecom in Pakistan, as Assistant manager cost accounting. My skills in Cost Accounting are exceptional and top of the line. Recently, I came to know that there is incredible demand of it in Canada, where <span style="color:red">I </span>will be able to enhance my abilities and work in a challenging environment with
diversified workforce. In addition, medical is free and most of <span style="color:#4472C4;mso-themecolor:accent1">the</span> amenities of life would
be available at <span style="color:red">short</span> distance. Therefore, I applied for Ontario immigration on <span style="color:red">the</span> human resource
scheme and<span style="color:red"> is </span>awarded one after fulfilling basic requirements. <o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">Hence, I will need a house in suburb area of Toronto, where there won’t be much noise and house could be rented with <span style="color:red">the</span> minimum amount and area occupied will be huge as compare<span style="color:red">d</span> to payment. As per house amenities, it should be completely furnished, have private garage, laundry area, open
kitchen and a study for children. It is a major plus if it will be near <span style="color:red">the</span> main highway, which will decrease travel time to any major industry. </span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">I am looking forward to your response, if you need any further information feel free to contact me on my mobile.</span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">Yours faithfully, </span></b><b style="font-size: 1.1em;"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;line-height:107%">SAIRA</span></b></p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , where
...os;>the near proximity of company,where I am going to work in near future. I am...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '> the largest'.
Suggestion: > the largest
...an style='color:red'>the largest telecom in Pakistan, as Assistant manag...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 937.175257732 282% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.29577464789 4.54256449028 205% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.4571126243 2.54303337028 529% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 290.88556701 228% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.41237113402 163% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.279092556 44.8134815571 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.0 76.5299724578 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0280172752679 0.216113520407 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234811102437 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336760893368 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0187277303967 0.12726935374 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013398311937 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 8.37731958763 421% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.12 70.7449484536 -19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 7.45979381443 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 36.96 8.71597938144 424% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 41.2886597938 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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