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you are renting a flat from an agency. your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat four months earlywrite a letter to the agency in your letter introduce yourselfask to leave the flat before the contract finishes.explain why you need to

Essay topics: you are renting a flat from an agency. your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat four months early

write a letter to the agency in your letter

introduce yourself

ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes.

explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir: John Smith

I am one of the tenants, who had a contract with your agency in January, 8th, 2018.basis on the contract , I was supposed to stay in the flat Oak 26, on Main tower street for one year. the flat is really convenient and the silence and cleanness is admirable.

Although I am completely enlightened about the rights regarded with the contract, and the fact that the landlord is sticky about the due date mentioned in the contract, I am afraid to announce that I have to vacate my flat months earlier.

our faculty of the university decided to hold our next term's subjects as virtual classes, which means students all will be able to go to their hometowns and take their courses at home through internet. consequently, my fellow students and I, are turning back home. therefore, I would like to tell you for the event.

because of new occasion, I have to take action against the contract and hand over the flat in advance. according to the rules of agency, I will be in-charge for paying compensation for early vacating. I am in your disposal all weekdays and look forward to hearing from you.

kindly regarded: Sahara

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...January, 8th, 2018.basis on the contract , I was supposed to stay in the flat Oak ...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... 26, on Main tower street for one year. the flat is really convenient and the silen...
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Line 11, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o announce that I have to vacate my flat months earlier. our faculty of t...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...vacate my flat months earlier. our faculty of the university decided to ho...
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Line 17, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...their courses at home through internet. consequently, my fellow students and I, are turning ...
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Line 17, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... students and I, are turning back home. therefore, I would like to tell you for the event...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ld like to tell you for the event. because of new occasion, I have to take action ...
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Line 21, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...ract and hand over the flat in advance. according to the rules of agency, I will be in-ch...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kindly
... look forward to hearing from you. kindly regarded: Sahara
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, really, therefore, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78217821782 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59538133439 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6637286219 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258083858891 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847312400269 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676692828158 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989986007348 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959818525618 0.0580467560999 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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