You are renting a new apartment, but your family situation has changed recently. Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation, more suitable for your needs.
In your letter explain – your current family situation. What type of new accommodation do you require?
When do you need to move?
Respected Sir,
As you are aware that in Ontario city is known for its world-class architecture on accommodation and therefore the staying cost of the cities are too high. The purpose of writing this letter to you is, I need you assistance in finding new accommodation as per my revised budget.
As you was aware that when we came to this city, I was only the person who was earning within 5 member of my family, therefore the entire responsibility was in me to run that house. I have worked hard and able to manage our routine household expenses and cost of accommodation. In past few days, my mother is not feeling well and blood pressure disease has been detected while she gone for routine check up to a our family doctor. They told us that disease our little serious and we have to take care of her properly. Due to unforseen and unexpected situation my monthly budget is disturbed and at the same time I don't want to compromise with my mother's health.
therefore, I request you to arrange a new accommodation according to my budget on ASAP basis so that I can move there at any point of time and which will help me to take care of my mother properly.
Thanking you,
Your Sincerely,
Praful Shah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'member' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'members'.
Suggestion: members
...nly the person who was earning within 5 member of my family, therefore the entire resp...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... while she gone for routine check up to a our family doctor. They told us that di...
^
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
... while she gone for routine check up to a our family doctor. They told us that diseas...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 615, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...get is disturbed and at the same time I dont want to compromise with my mothers heal...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... compromise with my mothers health. therefore, I request you to arrange a new accommo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g you, Your Sincerely, Praful Shah
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5799086758 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68636000889 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7034246768 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125530324989 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559904890744 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608002991246 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686925818754 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401902572394 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.