You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterAsk for some time off to complete a qualification.Mention what you will do during your time off.Say how the qualification will help your co

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You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.

Mention what you will do during your time off.

Say how the qualification will help your company.

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing today to ask you to grant me time off from work as I am appearing for Masters in Logistics examinations which are due this month. A fortnight leave will give me a head start as I will have ample of time for preparation.

First, I have to visit the university library and pick up syllabus material which will help me to enhance my understanding in the module. Next, I have to follow a schedule every day e.g. memorise principles and theories related to Mathematics, Supply chain management, Financial management and Business communications to get through in my assessments.

Upon successful accreditation, my qualification will help to practice management techniques in the warehouse i.e. I will be able to avoid wastage by eliminating activities which are causing them. Added to this, I can help this company to manage inventory efficiently by ordering the required levels of materials only so that spoilage of perishable goods can easily be avoided. As a result of this, our business will be lucrative; which means, profits will rise as a result from reduced expenses.

Faithfully,

Jack Dan

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...you to grant me time off from work as I am appearing for Masters in Logistics examinations w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., first, if, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10499538019 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5811403098 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158583775394 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637954162108 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593084123826 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107764251272 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800467093426 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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