You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterAsk for some time off to complete a qualificationSuggest what you will do later if you have time offSay how the qualif

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
Suggest what you will do later if you have time off
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. As you are well aware that, I am currently pursuing my Master's degree in Supply Chain Management. My exam schedule has been finalized and are suppose to start from 15th January 2019. Moreover, I would like to take some time off from job; so I can prepare for exams. As this degree will help me grow professionally and contribute towards betterment of the organisation.

Let me explain you further, once I have completed my Master's degree, this will provide me with an opportunity to implement new methods in our company. Furthermore, the impact of this will be an increase in productivity and profits. Moreover, the time taken off from work will adjusted accordingly, once my exams are finished. As, I will be having an ample time to make up for the lost one.

Therefore, it is requested to consider my application and grant me leave for two weeks. So, I can prepare for my exams and successfully clear them; as this will provide me with an opportunity to grow personally and professionally.

Yours Sincerely

Allan Border

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. As yo...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...xam schedule has been finalized and are suppose to start from 15th January 2019. Moreov...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'adjust'
Suggestion: adjust
...over, the time taken off from work will adjusted accordingly, once my exams are finished...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple time to make up for the lost one. Therefore, it is requested to consider m...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and professionally. Yours Sincerely Allan Border
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85945945946 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89133108985 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3247411264 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245882893798 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864498519711 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650994302457 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154641182392 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699551038026 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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