You wish to apply for a position with a company in your city. Write a letter to the manager of this company and include the following information:
– your educational background
– your work experience
– other information that makes you an ideal candidate for the position
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wish to apply for an opening of 'Assistant Manager Procurement'; advertised in Dawn newspaper dated 19th December, 2018. I have had professional experience of almost 4 years in the field of procurement and have specialised in public procurement rules and regulations. Moreover, my educational background and work experience are co-related with advertised post.
Let me explain you further. I have been working as an Assistant Manager Logistics in a government organisation for last four years. My professional experience and exposure gives me an edge over other candidates, as managing different clientele and pressure in a government organisation is altogether different from private sector. Furthermore, government employees are also under limelight; due to large amount of public money allocation. Moreover,on different occasions random audits are conducted in order to find out any sort of financial embezzlement.
Therefore, it is requested to consider my profile for the opening of 'Assistant Manager Procurement' in your organisation and for reference I am also attaching my CV.
Regards
Yours Sincerely
Ahmed Ali Arbani
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I wis...
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Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2018'.
Suggestion: December 2018
...advertised in Dawn newspaper dated 19th December, 2018. I have had professional experience of ...
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...unt of public money allocation. Moreover,on different occasions random audits are c...
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Suggestion:
...ut any sort of financial embezzlement. Therefore, it is requested to consider m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e I am also attaching my CV. Regards Yours Sincerely Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g my CV. Regards Yours Sincerely Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68539325843 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30968974472 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6669902184 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236538646865 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820621141406 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506524010133 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140483005895 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455630128743 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.