Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourist activities have been increasing tremendously all over the world. People are exploring new places, and are visiting places which are less known to many. Currently, we have seen a large amount population visiting Antarctic and African deserts. Some people believe it to be a good sign, as these places are explored and will promote economic activity for local population; while few believe it to be bad, as more tourism might lead to damaging natural resources and habitat of local animals. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of tourism and what sort of impact it has.
Africa, is known to be least developed continent among all. However, it is full of natural resources; but, the local population is deprived of basic necessities. In past few years, there has been an increase in number of tourists visiting less known places in Africa. This has helped people to understand and get connected with other people of the world. Moreover, this has lead to exposure for them and getting to know about the facilities. Due to these activities, large number of people have been able to become employed, and has helped to reduce crime and unemployment rate.
While on the other hand, tourism activities on northern pole have provided an opportunity for local population to improve their standard of living, but with few problems. As, natural habitat is getting damaged because of pollution and increasing temperatures. Furthermore, on numerous occasions instances of melting icebergs and glaciers have occurred; reasons for this as per research are rising temperatures and an increase in human activities. Moreover, different species have also started migrating from Antarctica.
In my opinion, tourism has been playing a vital role in bringing different cultures together. However, there are few preventative measures which are needed to be taken, so that natural habitat and beauty of nature doesn't suffer. In order to do so, it is important to take care of different sort of pollution's being caused by tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23547400612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7738840557 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8647030695 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115202809282 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350523595607 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492177796924 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670772488279 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065871918795 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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