You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear Hassan,
I hope this letter finds you well, I have recently applied for the Masters in Supply Chain Management from Vancouver university situated in Ontario, Canada. It is to mention, as I am currently facing few issues. Therefore, advise is required from your end.
Let me explain you further. Firstly, duration of my program is one and half years and there were few pre-requisites, which I have already completed. Moreover, for the arrangements of residency I have given your name. So, they have asked me or any of my representatives to visit university, as they want to handover few mandatory documents. Furthermore, I have already submitted my proof of funds and financial statements. These documents already cover my living, tuition and travelling expense. So, there is nothing to worry about.
However, it is requested to kindly visit university on my behalf and inform them about my character;ensure them about my accommodation and get hold of mandatory documents from university. Hopefully, you will do me this favour.
Looking for to hearing from you,
Regards
Yours Sincerely,
Ahmed Ali Arbani
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Hassan, I hope this letter finds you well, I hav...
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...of residency I have given your name. So, they have asked me or any of my represen...
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...ur. Looking for to hearing from you, Regards Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Al...
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...ing for to hearing from you, Regards Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Ali Arbani ...
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... Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34636871508 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08625721785 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2981510029 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6153846154 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19377372189 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741858105291 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726397230865 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125186566287 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025047413907 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.