You are working for a company. Write a letter to your boss to propose a training course you want to attend.•What the training course is•Why you think this course is helpful to you•Propose your suitable time to attend the training.

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. Write a letter to your boss to propose a training course you want to attend.
• What the training course is
• Why you think this course is helpful to you
• Propose your suitable time to attend the training.

Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. It is to inform you that, I want to attend a training course named 'PPRR'
(Public Procurement Rules and Regulations). This course will be conducted in Dubai, at the end of November. Moreover, training would be conducted by world's renowned supply chain analysts. This course will prove beneficial for my professional and personal growth.
Let me explain you in detail. As this course is been conducted in U.A.E, this will provide an opportunity for us to interact with supply chain analyst and also with suppliers from different parts of world. Moreover, this will also provide us with an opportunity to interact with international vendors and inform them about our products. Furthermore, this will improve our supply chain skills and give us an edge over other companies. However, as we are a strategic organisation, therefore, we need to take care of our booking schedule and take prior approval from competent authorities.
Therefore,it is requested to arrange a training for us, so that we can get benefited from it. Moreover, this will prove to be beneficial for company as well. Looking forward to positive response from your end.

Yours Sincerely

Alan Border

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. It is...
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...t to attend a training course named PPRR Public Procurement Rules and Regulations...
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Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...growth. Let me explain you in detail. As this course is been conducted in U.A.E,...
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...As this course is been conducted in U.A.E, this will provide an opportunity for u...
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... this will provide an opportunity for us to interact with supply chain analyst an...
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... from competent authorities. Therefore,it is requested to arrange a training for ...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ponse from your end. Yours Sincerely Alan Border
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...end. Yours Sincerely Alan Border
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1256281407 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81292151711 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9195379133 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8571428571 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230502612986 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875909975606 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075345894804 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180160393525 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142265014872 0.0580467560999 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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