Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Nowadays, marketing techniques have changed rapidly. These days, competition amongst different companies has increased, which is being seen as a major reason behind changing marketing techniques. However, multinational organisations have large amount of funds at their disposal. Therefore, this helps them to achieve revenue targets and increase their profits subsequently. This essay will discuss the problems being caused by multinationals to local companies, and what measures are needed to encourage customers to purchase local products.
Pakistan, has been a hub for large foreign companies; whether they are selling daily use items such as soaps, detergents and etc. or selling luxury goods. We are currently witnessing a monopoly in car market, as motor vehicle manufacturers are international companies and have their manufacturing plants situated in Pakistan. However, they are charging high rates and providing low quality products. At this point, questions arise; what needs to be done in order to avoid this issues?, How can things be overturned and domestic manufacturers be encouraged?
Government of Pakistan, needs to take responsibility to regulate these matters and consider it's impact. As, encouraging local vendors will keep money in our country. Moreover, it is also important to provide subsidies to local manufacturers and companies, so that they can compete with international players. However, subsides should be withdrawn, once local companies are able to compete on their own.
In my opinion, it is important for government to play its role in maintaining balance between different companies. So, that there is fair competition amongst all the organisations and in the end consumers benefit from it and are able to get full value of their money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e customers to purchase local products. Pakistan, has been a hub for large forei...
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...ily use items such as soaps, detergents and etc. or selling luxury goods. We are current...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... these matters and consider its impact. As, encouraging local vendors will keep mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60223048327 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09185979962 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6173013575 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225576715895 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644775710115 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616989165882 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125897574985 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772958386997 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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