Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Assigning substantial amount of money for the advertisement and sales improvement of the product has been a trend to capture the market. It has been seen that buyers inclination towards the products which is being promoted on the large scale by the companies is tremendous. This attributes to some issues which include the low quality of items causing hazardous health issues. These reasons force us to encourage people to buy only locally made products which could be done by providing education to them.
Nowadays, for acquiring global market, more and more companies not only spend huge money in adverts but also pour it into an endorsement which eventually attracts people all around the world to purchase it. However, this causes the decline in product quality below the acceptable level. For Instance, if we consider the food items, not produced with proper hygiene due to lack of money which was already invested in marketing, then those foods can cause severe health issues to the consumers. This also can affect the young impressionable mind to be a rebel with their parents for expensive things and can have a detrimental effect on society.
Unemployment is the predominant factor rises because of this culture. Hence, to end this we need to arrange awareness campaign for the people in which the importance of purchasing local products and its effect on the country’s economy must be explained. Additionally, how the employment risk would be resolved must be told. The message should be passed that how these practices eventually would be beneficial and sustainable for the country.
In conclusion, as big branded companies are taking advantages of a human tendency by attracting people towards their products by monetary investment rather than quality improvement, this results in a social imbalance in the community. This could be discouraged by educating people about the economic benefits after taking locally produced items.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buyers'' or 'buyer's'?
Suggestion: buyers'; buyer's
...pture the market. It has been seen that buyers inclination towards the products which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29449838188 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82430282746 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608414239482 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9316369384 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31646742438 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101837455127 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615611030722 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188614662314 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558202978644 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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