Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Large multinational conglomerates spend a huge amount of money to promote their products and services, which attracts customers towards purchasing their merchandise and services. This trend may cause a number of problems such as winding up of local industries, offering of substandard quality of products by these companies and fading away of cultural divide. In order to reverse this trend, people should be motivated to buy local products and local companies must be encouraged to offer quality services and personalized products.
Firstly, this trend of offering extra-ordinary discounts by big business houses affects the local economy adversely. A large number of small scale and tiny industries, which are heavily dependent upon the locals for their survival, cannot compete with these big business houses because of their poor purchasing power and are ultimately forced to closure. Diminishing of these indigenous industries leads to widespread unemployment which causes the unemployed youth to take menial jobs and forces them towards social evils such as drug abuse, robbery etc.
Secondly, companies offering good discounts create a monopolistic environment and make people dependent upon them for their day to day requirements. These companies then exploit this excessive dependence of people on them by offering sub-standard products at handsome profit margins. Due to lack of competition, the customers are left with very limited choices and they are persuaded to buy whatever these companies wish to sell at whatever prices. In other words they never get value for their money.
With a view to reverse this trend, people should be made aware about benefits of purchasing local indigenous products. Government should design suitable policies and start welfare schemes to provide necessary support and uplift micro, small and medium enterprises. These small enterprises should also be pressed upon to offer personalized services and customized products as per needs and requirements of the local people to cater to their demands in a better and effective manner.
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...mands in a better and effective manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58044164038 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86325177891 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2809787503 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279662641857 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993375752962 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634217709951 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169764995457 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629564450055 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.