Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
In today’s world, there are a-lot of professions that a person can opt for. Amongst those are some that are highly paid. Some people think entertainers to be highly paid profession, while few believe Chief executives to be highly paid. This essay will discuss about the professionals that are being highly paid and are entertainers amongst them.
There is a mix opinion in market regarding entertainers being highly paid off. Those who think it to be true believe natural talent of these stars to be the main reason behind it. Movie stars, musicians and etc. are highly paid due to their set of skills, which no one else possesses. These set of skills makes them different from others. There is a term called in marketing “unique selling proposition” that refers to products standing out in the market due to their uniqueness that no one else can match. Likewise every individual has a unique quality, which they utilize to earn and stand-out. Moreover, it is also quoted on different occasions that “if you are good are something, never do it for free”. This explains the logic behind sports star and other entertainers being highly paid.
However, there are other jobs that should be highly paid. It is important to identify unique selling point of an individual. Few individuals have great leadership skills, while few have good analytical skills. These all set of skills should be included in highly paid professionals.
Every individual is different from another. We all have our own set of skills. Therefore, it is important for us to identify our strong skills and work on them. So, that we all can get ourselves up there in highly paid professions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...eason behind it. Movie stars, musicians and etc. are highly paid due to their set of ski...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
... uniqueness that no one else can match. Likewise every individual has a unique quality, ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ify our strong skills and work on them. So, that we all can get ourselves up there in hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02491103203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78584731756 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523131672598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.634303002 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2380952381 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281540577517 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949092492149 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876249870903 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170389133924 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632804349371 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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