Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Amusement is quintessential to overcome the stressful life. Also, our economy promote entertainment in different ways. Celebrities like film stars, musicians or sports stars are well known for their fame and highly paid income which sometimes seems to be disproportionate to their work. I agree with the view with my favoured opinion that other professionals also contribute a lot to the nation and should be paid accordingly.
Today's lifestyle encourages people to dispose of their earnings in order to get amusement which in results increase the demand for entertainers, consequently, they are paid with marvellous salary. Also, their fame sustain for short span of time such as sportspersons are replaced by more energetic, enthusiastic youth similarly, film stars face age factor challenges with the passage of time can be considered as one of the reasons for such high remuneration in respect of their work.
On the other hand, other professionals who actually contribute towards nation such as, teachers, nurses, researchers and military persons, are the real heroes of the country who are unfortunately not considered in proportion of their sacrifice, efforts for boosting up the economy. Although, these professionals do not bring foreign direct investment like entertainers but are the basic pillars to run life smoothly. Moreover, other people like teachers, doctors play a pivotal role in the early stages of life and have great significance on the individual as they grow up. Therefore, they should be respect with the reward in terms of handsome salary.
To conclude, entertainer and other professionals have their own importance and both assist for the enhancement of the economy. The essay discussed the reason for the high remuneration of performers and also the areas which are deprived of such reward. I personally agree that apart from entertainer other people should get the privilege of high salary according to their contribution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 601, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'respected'?
Suggestion: respected
...they grow up. Therefore, they should be respect with the reward in terms of handsome sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43137254902 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08672543234 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1931521734 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231697162103 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821546324654 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650600207918 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151975987077 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714491409585 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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