Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days crime rate has increased rapidly as compared to past. There is an urge to change the punishments and make them flexible or depending on the scenarios of crime. However, there is another school of thought which believes in fixed punishment for crimes committed.
In our society there are people who believe in fixed punishment for crimes. They believe that in order to maintain law and order, it is important to give punishment. If law and justice is situation based, than this will cause the process to become questionable and can be manipulated easily. Furthermore, they have an opinion that crimes can be reduced only by fear of punishment or else they will increase, if there is lenient approach.
However, on the other hand, there is an opinion in favor of having different punishment depending on circumstances of crime. As people believe that every crime and its factors are different from another one. Therefore, it is important to consider and think about different punishment styles, i.e. if a person commits a minor crime than he should be given a minor punishment. Moreover, if juvenile commits a crime and is given fixed punishment, this might lead to him becoming a professional criminal.
In order to prosper and contribute towards betterment of society it is important to consider different aspects that lead to a crime, it is important to consider the factors behind the crime and should be taken into account. In my opinion, in current scenario it is better to have different styles of punishments, which vary with the situation, rather than opting for fixed ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03007518797 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77872195811 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8245136353 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386642579258 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13795801287 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754155824867 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233924013488 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430898733049 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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